Decide

*RayMe* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:01 PM

Trust (changed the title)

Every one around you always lie.
They may smile.
They may cry.
They may whine.

They don't tell the truth all the time.
Keeping it is what some do best.
Wearing a mask is what every one is.
Concealed their emotions and motives are.

Who can you trust and Who you can't...
The questions that kept throbbing in my head.
What can you trust and What is trustworthy...
Theres little out there.

Nice things can be ugly inside.
Beautiful ones can be rotten ones.
Calm waters may have crocodiles.
Nothing is what it seems.

There may be some who shows it's true colours,
or would it be they are just concealing another?
Would you show your inner beauty?
Can i see your true identity?

If the ones near you are not sincere enough,
can you believe those who are far away?
Would you give away all you confidence in it?
Do you think they will hurt you in the end?

Words...
They may sprout out beautifully.
What if the mouth that spits out this words are foul?
Would you trust another who deceived you once?

or....
Do you rather slice open those old wounds of yours?
Ask this questions to your self again and again...
May u do a better choice next time.

Good luck...

*atomik_sprout* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:10 PM

Awesome! Simply awesome! This is a very well written poem. I think that you should've titled this as "trust" instead of "decide". But either way, this is a great piece of poetry. You get mad props! ^_^ I hope to read more.

*RayMe* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:13 PM

Ahh,... domo arigatou ^^ lol ahh never thought i'll get such response

ty ^^ trust eh.. hmm... it does sound better... maybe i should change it

Angeling · Jun 06, 2007, 02:24 PM

I dislike poetry simply because I can't understand it. But I understand the message of yours easily and it's nicely put too ^__^ I give you cookie points~

*RayMe* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:29 PM

aww.. thats sweet of you ^^ i love cookies xD thank you ^^

dark1angel · Jun 06, 2007, 02:30 PM

I would not foul myself but to keep on trusting someone that honestly dears me in that really believes truly and from the inside i believe they are really telling the truth the poem here you have posted in is kind of a wether should i trust or not to trust this person that betrays so dearly upon me but i wished i can say it was perfect but it turned out to be painful for me to listen to it i wished i can give you credit about it.
I would like to see more like this in the future keep it up.

KuwiRules145 · Jun 06, 2007, 02:37 PM

Oh wow!!! This is an amazing poem!!! Really!!!! I don't know why but it seems so good sorry but it's just so good to read over and over!!!!! I hope to see more!!!

*RayMe* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:41 PM

i understand... ^^ this poem tells me how deep i understand ur emotions dar1angel ^^

Lol... kuwi ^^ sure...i'll do more...better one's i hope...

sparkels · Jun 06, 2007, 02:43 PM

claps**

i love it. Im like that other person, i dont understand peoms all that well but i got ur point.

*RayMe* · Jun 06, 2007, 02:46 PM

^^ thank you....first time i got an applause...

hmm...it's very simple right? ^^ i like keeping it simple...

sparkels · Jun 06, 2007, 03:22 PM

yes it was simple, and thats half the reason why i liked it actually.

Jun 06, 2007, 02:01 PM	#1 (permalink)
RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,138	Decide Trust (changed the title) Every one around you always lie. They may smile. They may cry. They may whine. They don't tell the truth all the time. Keeping it is what some do best. Wearing a mask is what every one is. Concealed their emotions and motives are. Who can you trust and Who you can't... The questions that kept throbbing in my head. What can you trust and What is trustworthy... Theres little out there. Nice things can be ugly inside. Beautiful ones can be rotten ones. Calm waters may have crocodiles. Nothing is what it seems. There may be some who shows it's true colours, or would it be they are just concealing another? Would you show your inner beauty? Can i see your true identity? If the ones near you are not sincere enough, can you believe those who are far away? Would you give away all you confidence in it? Do you think they will hurt you in the end? Words... They may sprout out beautifully. What if the mouth that spits out this words are foul? Would you trust another who deceived you once? or.... Do you rather slice open those old wounds of yours? Ask this questions to your self again and again... May u do a better choice next time. Good luck... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<< Last edited by RayMe; Jun 06, 2007 at 02:15 PM.
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atomik_sprout CHUCK NORRIS!!! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,087 Thanks: 55 Thanked 69 Times in 64 Posts Credits: 110,749	Re: Decide Awesome! Simply awesome! This is a very well written poem. I think that you should've titled this as "trust" instead of "decide". But either way, this is a great piece of poetry. You get mad props! ^_^ I hope to read more. __________________ http://www.myspace.com/boondocksamurai
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,138	Re: Decide Ahh,... domo arigatou ^^ lol ahh never thought i'll get such response ty ^^ trust eh.. hmm... it does sound better... maybe i should change it __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Angeling Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 26 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 10	Re: Decide I dislike poetry simply because I can't understand it. But I understand the message of yours easily and it's nicely put too ^__^ I give you cookie points~ __________________ "You have the face of an Angel"
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,138	Re: Decide aww.. thats sweet of you ^^ i love cookies xD thank you ^^ __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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dark1angel Tournaments Won: 1 Hybrid Humanoid Forever Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: In a Purified Realm Of Lightness Posts: 561 Thanks: 71 Thanked 21 Times in 21 Posts Credits: 20,940	Re: Decide I would not foul myself but to keep on trusting someone that honestly dears me in that really believes truly and from the inside i believe they are really telling the truth the poem here you have posted in is kind of a wether should i trust or not to trust this person that betrays so dearly upon me but i wished i can say it was perfect but it turned out to be painful for me to listen to it i wished i can give you credit about it. I would like to see more like this in the future keep it up. __________________ Traveling so far can mean anything but in the real world your life can expand to your dreams. \|アスタロス\|
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,138	Re: Decide i understand... ^^ this poem tells me how deep i understand ur emotions dar1angel ^^ Lol... kuwi ^^ sure...i'll do more...better one's i hope... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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sparkels Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 46	Re: Decide claps** i love it. Im like that other person, i dont understand peoms all that well but i got ur point.
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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,138	Re: Decide ^^ thank you....first time i got an applause... hmm...it's very simple right? ^^ i like keeping it simple... __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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sparkels Newbie Join Date: Jun 2007 Posts: 34 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 46	Re: Decide yes it was simple, and thats half the reason why i liked it actually.
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