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Reply With QuoteAwesome! Simply awesome! This is a very well written poem. I think that you should've titled this as "trust" instead of "decide". But either way, this is a great piece of poetry. You get mad props! ^_^ I hope to read more.
Trust (changed the title)
Every one around you always lie.
They may smile.
They may cry.
They may whine.
They don't tell the truth all the time.
Keeping it is what some do best.
Wearing a mask is what every one is.
Concealed their emotions and motives are.
Who can you trust and Who you can't...
The questions that kept throbbing in my head.
What can you trust and What is trustworthy...
Theres little out there.
Nice things can be ugly inside.
Beautiful ones can be rotten ones.
Calm waters may have crocodiles.
Nothing is what it seems.
There may be some who shows it's true colours,
or would it be they are just concealing another?
Would you show your inner beauty?
Can i see your true identity?
If the ones near you are not sincere enough,
can you believe those who are far away?
Would you give away all you confidence in it?
Do you think they will hurt you in the end?
Words...
They may sprout out beautifully.
What if the mouth that spits out this words are foul?
Would you trust another who deceived you once?
or....
Do you rather slice open those old wounds of yours?
Ask this questions to your self again and again...
May u do a better choice next time.
Good luck...
Last edited by RayMe; Jun 06, 2007 at 02:15 PM.
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Awesome! Simply awesome! This is a very well written poem. I think that you should've titled this as "trust" instead of "decide". But either way, this is a great piece of poetry. You get mad props! ^_^ I hope to read more.
Ahh,... domo arigatou ^^ lol ahh never thought i'll get such response
ty ^^ trust eh.. hmm... it does sound better... maybe i should change it
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I dislike poetry simply because I can't understand it. But I understand the message of yours easily and it's nicely put too ^__^ I give you cookie points~
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aww.. thats sweet of you ^^ i love cookies xD thank you ^^
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I would not foul myself but to keep on trusting someone that honestly dears me in that really believes truly and from the inside i believe they are really telling the truth the poem here you have posted in is kind of a wether should i trust or not to trust this person that betrays so dearly upon me but i wished i can say it was perfect but it turned out to be painful for me to listen to it i wished i can give you credit about it.
I would like to see more like this in the future keep it up.
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Oh wow!!! This is an amazing poem!!! Really!!!! I don't know why but it seems so good sorry but it's just so good to read over and over!!!!! I hope to see more!!!
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i understand... ^^ this poem tells me how deep i understand ur emotions dar1angel ^^
Lol... kuwi ^^ sure...i'll do more...better one's i hope...
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