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    A dedication to the first

    A life of colors come into bloom
    But it is of two

    On one
    colors splatter like a wild man's paint
    On two
    colors tossed like a fairy's rush

    They meet
    in hesitation
    in connection
    in melding

    Colors swirl
    passed one another
    around one another

    They are at a distance
    The tips touch
    But never hold

    It's enough


    Two
    Spirals infinitely into the sky
    Exploding into colors of wonder and grandeur

    One
    Spirals with then stops
    Admiring the colors that light the sky

    One
    Reaches out
    Just to feel the tip again

    Two
    Never reaches out
    Looks strangely at the hesitant

    One
    Reaches out
    Just to feel the tip again

    Two
    Swallows the colors
    Spirals once more

    One
    Reaches out...
    Just to feel... the tip... just one more time...

    Two
    So far away
    Spiraling and coloring

    One
    Pulls away
    Colors becoming still and faded


    Colors light up the sky
    While a faded light floats softly to the ground
    Where darkness takes and gives

    An odd shape trundles by
    With only one solid color
    But light that shines so bright

    It pokes
    It prods
    And it stays

    Yet the faded colors continue to stay
    Saved from darkness
    Yet willing to be overcome

    With a push
    The colors are lifted
    And held
    As the odd shape trundles away

    Away from the colors in the sky
    With the darkness below that was left behind

    The shape refuses the darkness
    Protecting the faded colors that slowly grow bright

    Yet as it is carried away
    The colors in the sky swirl in fury
    It reaches back...

    Far away.
    The colors dim...

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    Re: A dedication to the first

    Beautiful. It appears to be the sunrise, though I may be wrong. The words twirl and swirl within my mind naturally and beautifully. I'm happy I fell on your poem as the sun is about to rise where I live...I should probably be in bed.

    Nice poem and interesting way of writing it.
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    Re: A dedication to the first

    always i like this kind of poems because i like to read poem.

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