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    Deep Blue Sky

    As I look into the deep blue sky
    Way way far and wide
    Wondering just one thing
    Why birds fly and sing.
    As I kept looking into the deep blue sky
    Wondering about that same thing
    I felt something hit me from way way high
    And now I know why they fly and sing.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    okay... you sparked my interrest. why?

    By the way i like your poem.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    i just can't explain how i feel about this poem its so...emotional..and very good describing as well.^^
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    Thank you I have others that I will post later on if I can find my folder with them in it.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    Yes this is very very nice! Short and sweet! It had very good emotion in it hope to see more!^^



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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    I posted my second poem I would gladly love it if you would check it out. Thank you again for reading my poems hopefully I can continue to create poems that you love and enjoy.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    *sigh* One more.... Have you been daydreaming? Actually, this poem is quite interesting... You know, when I read this poem, I thought I was daydreaming.... It's funny... lol Like your poems *smile* ....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Deep Blue Sky

    I felt something hit me from way way high
    And now I know why they fly and sing.
    i got the impression that they pooped
    on your head and that why they fly and sing
    the poem to me had some humour in it sorry if
    thats not what you were going for i liked this poem a alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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