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    Deep feelings

    I rushed out to quick
    Never stop to think
    I kept pushing
    Am starting to sink

    I hold on to secrets
    I never told this to anybody
    Do I deserve happiness?
    My feelings are bloody

    I fell so deep
    My pain didn't stopped
    It only wished
    That I had dropped

    It kills me to say this
    I only want to die
    I was forsaken
    I don't know why

    My feelings are so deep
    I had to dig them out
    As I hold on
    It made me shout.

    The pain made me cry
    I shed my tears
    Why I keep smiling?
    After all those years?

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    Re: Deep feelings

    Hmmmm... I wonder?

    I like this poem fitting for today and myself as well. Feelings of being alone and not being able to trust anyone. Feelings of not knowing why you feel the way you do. I love this poem, hellknight. I can relate to it in several ways. My favorite I liked because it is how I feel so often to a T. The stanza as quoted:
    I fell so deep
    My pain didn't stopped
    It only wished
    That I had dropped

    Keep writing! I look forward to reading more.^_^

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Deep feelings

    Thank you for sharing this poem with us, at least it seems like you're opening up for us here and it's really cool. I enjoyed reading this, it's like it explained my feelings...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Deep feelings

    Thanks DS and Lasura, I expressed on how I really felt, but only in a way that I want to write lol.

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    Re: Deep feelings

    this poem shows a great pain that i can relate to... keep up the good work!!!

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    Re: Deep feelings

    Thanks mei, and I know it shows great pain, but I think it also shows great depression.

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    Re: Deep feelings

    i love your poem hellknight...you are a wonderful poet. thank you for sharing your gift with us

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    Re: Deep feelings

    Your welcome Kiki, and if your looking forward to read more of my work, I'll be glad to share it.

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