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Deep Trench
First time, complete strangers
Lonely, the both of us
Still met and somehow got close
The love of your life was I
Even though we were an unknown kind to each other
You were still gentle to me
Hiding your grim past and failures
You wrapped your arms around me
I just waited there,
Just one of those girls I thought…
But you weren’t
You were, and I’m sure still, one of a kind
We got closer in the end :)
Alone once searching inside each others' eyes
You awaited my response
My mind was stammering- I couldn’t move against your warm body
It was just… a heart - warming experience
I wanted to be with you
With our red hot lips against each other
Our body so close, keeping each other warm and loved
Exploring our each other, getting closer by mind and body
I used to run my hands through your hair
Convincing you I’ll never leave you
Keeping you safe and warm in my arms
Only feeding off our love, passion
And indescribable feelings for you
I just want you to know,
That even though we departed in complete opposite directions
I respect you, your decision and your support
I just want you to know, I’ll always love you
You’ve taken a huge chunk of my life with you, sweetheart
And I want it to be in your thoughts and diary
When you’re a woman, married with kids beside you
I know I’ll be in your mind, even if as a tiny amoebic thing
I could never repay you
But I’ll shed tears here and there
Our last kiss with enough passion to fill the
Vast gap that we’ll miss out
For the rest of our lives.
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Re: Deep Trench
oh wow... that was touching and really made me emote poem..
maybe you're not meant for each other..
memory still lingers..
i love it man!
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Re: Deep Trench
I can relate in some ways. It's always hard when someone you love leaves/dies. Always... I enjoyed the poem. It's fairly well written and kept my attention. Good Job! Keep it up! Can't wait to read more! ^_^
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Re: Deep Trench
Yes I agree with everyone. This poem is very emotional. I believe it is your most emotional yet. And when a reader can feel what the poet does when writing it... that is a sign of excellent talent. Great job.