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And then I sit under a tree
It gave me shade and breeze
It made my feel supreme and spree
But then I heard a noise behind;
The bush that is white then a light
Came out that could make you blind
I open my eyes when the light is already gone and;
I saw a two headed dog standing at my front
And I thought it is my end
The dog left head speak and says
Why are you here what are you doing?
What for the visit you pay
I reply with a cold voice that is shaking
"Sir the beast at the field send me here
And he says I should go to the fairy that is grinding"
The right head of dog raise his head,
And laugh like a thunder that is full of might
I feel like I am standing at a fire bed
"You fool" it said with roar
"Cause nothing you can do
Even you try to soar
The left head defend me from him
"You must give the child a chance
Before we judge if his mind is slim
Therefore you go at the wild
Deep inside the forest of terror
And learn how to grind
I continue my journey even thou
I didn't understand what they mean
I must find it out, I must know
Then I saw a stream the is very cool
I knee down to take a sip
"Stop you stupid fool"
A voice came frome nowhere appear
I feel a great terror
Because of what I hear
Then a small bird that it eyes
Were shut by needle and thread
It is crying with blood and lies
"You must not drink the water of eternity
We were created to give joy and happines
But you just put us pain and misery
You squashed our head with your thumb
You think were are stupid but no;
You are the dumb"
I can't understand what he means
Cause I was been born yesterday
And I am only a young human being
I try to comfort him but he
Refuse and speak
Like a guillotine in the darkness flee
You were his favorite because
You had his image even you kill us
Without any cause
"What do you mean I cannot uderstand" I reply
"Maybe you didn't remember but;
In the end you cannot escape you cannot deny"
Then it flew away above the golden clouds
With bloody wings of joy and pain
And it lift it's head with proud
I continue my journey through the woods
Without knowing the consequences that;
Will happen in the end of any goods
I walk and walk and at last I came
To the fairy's house with grinder
I try to find his entity and shame
When I try to knock the door It open with please
Then with a psalm she came
Full of clarity and heavenly beast
I know you will came to enlightened your mind
To distinguish the truth
And the sins of your kind
But first go inside and then
Get the mystical grinder
It is behind the astonishing pen
Then I enter his house and do what she want
I get the grinder behind the pen
And it is the same with a powerful enchant
Like a crocodile in the nether swamp
I go inside her prosperity and kind
To reveal the wicked the lamp
"Now" she speak with a soft voice in;
The rose of thorns and blood
"Reveal your truth behind thy kins"
I cannot understand what she meant by that
I didn't had the eyes of cat
Nor the percepetion of a bat
But she walk toward me and touch my cheek
Like a snow in the middle of the land
Or the lava at the volcano's peak
You must not hesitate to do what it is
Necessarily: yes or no?
Decide with out any tease
"You will grind your shell to reaveal
What is inside and broke
The dreaded seal
I closed my eyes and focus my brain
And a shadow appear in my mind
"Lets play if you lose, all of your memory will ddrain"
I didn't speak for a while
Cause I must find out if I was still there or already exiled
Plss reply or send me a message cause I want to know if my poem sucks or hilarious.. cause if this poem sucks, I will not spend my energy and effort for continuing this narrative poem anymore.
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