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    Deeps inside the forest :the fairy and the grinder (Human against nature partII)

    And then I sit under a tree
    It gave me shade and breeze
    It made my feel supreme and spree

    But then I heard a noise behind;
    The bush that is white then a light
    Came out that could make you blind

    I open my eyes when the light is already gone and;
    I saw a two headed dog standing at my front
    And I thought it is my end

    The dog left head speak and says
    Why are you here what are you doing?
    What for the visit you pay

    I reply with a cold voice that is shaking
    "Sir the beast at the field send me here
    And he says I should go to the fairy that is grinding"

    The right head of dog raise his head,
    And laugh like a thunder that is full of might
    I feel like I am standing at a fire bed

    "You fool" it said with roar
    "Cause nothing you can do
    Even you try to soar

    The left head defend me from him
    "You must give the child a chance
    Before we judge if his mind is slim

    Therefore you go at the wild
    Deep inside the forest of terror
    And learn how to grind

    I continue my journey even thou
    I didn't understand what they mean
    I must find it out, I must know

    Then I saw a stream the is very cool
    I knee down to take a sip
    "Stop you stupid fool"

    A voice came frome nowhere appear
    I feel a great terror
    Because of what I hear

    Then a small bird that it eyes
    Were shut by needle and thread
    It is crying with blood and lies

    "You must not drink the water of eternity
    We were created to give joy and happines
    But you just put us pain and misery

    You squashed our head with your thumb
    You think were are stupid but no;
    You are the dumb"

    I can't understand what he means
    Cause I was been born yesterday
    And I am only a young human being

    I try to comfort him but he
    Refuse and speak
    Like a guillotine in the darkness flee

    You were his favorite because
    You had his image even you kill us
    Without any cause

    "What do you mean I cannot uderstand" I reply
    "Maybe you didn't remember but;
    In the end you cannot escape you cannot deny"

    Then it flew away above the golden clouds
    With bloody wings of joy and pain
    And it lift it's head with proud

    I continue my journey through the woods
    Without knowing the consequences that;
    Will happen in the end of any goods

    I walk and walk and at last I came
    To the fairy's house with grinder
    I try to find his entity and shame

    When I try to knock the door It open with please
    Then with a psalm she came
    Full of clarity and heavenly beast

    I know you will came to enlightened your mind
    To distinguish the truth
    And the sins of your kind

    But first go inside and then
    Get the mystical grinder
    It is behind the astonishing pen

    Then I enter his house and do what she want
    I get the grinder behind the pen
    And it is the same with a powerful enchant

    Like a crocodile in the nether swamp
    I go inside her prosperity and kind
    To reveal the wicked the lamp

    "Now" she speak with a soft voice in;
    The rose of thorns and blood
    "Reveal your truth behind thy kins"

    I cannot understand what she meant by that
    I didn't had the eyes of cat
    Nor the percepetion of a bat

    But she walk toward me and touch my cheek
    Like a snow in the middle of the land
    Or the lava at the volcano's peak

    You must not hesitate to do what it is
    Necessarily: yes or no?
    Decide with out any tease

    "You will grind your shell to reaveal
    What is inside and broke
    The dreaded seal

    I closed my eyes and focus my brain
    And a shadow appear in my mind
    "Lets play if you lose, all of your memory will ddrain"

    I didn't speak for a while
    Cause I must find out if I was still there or already exiled

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    Re: Deeps inside the forest :the fairy and the grinder (Human against nature partII)

    Plss reply or send me a message cause I want to know if my poem sucks or hilarious.. cause if this poem sucks, I will not spend my energy and effort for continuing this narrative poem anymore.

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