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    Demension.

    In the dark
    the loss of light
    Your fear
    is his delight

    He laughs
    as you scream
    Your worst nightmare
    is his most fantastic dream.

    In this world of absence you stay
    never seeing the light
    of the day
    again.

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    Re: Demension.

    Awesome. you are not affraid to go to the dark side of things and that is why you rock the forum so. Are the last two stanzas a form of rictameter?

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    Re: Demension.

    Its a very creative poem!
    I loved it was more dark side than light and the strength to counquer things in dark is a very good thing to do^_^

    Awesome poem^_^!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    wow...cool poem..random.. ..uhmm, can u make one for me? uhmm,just about friendship..hihi :P ..keep cool ...gud day!

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    Re: Demension.

    Wow that is very cool how did you come up with it it has so much meaning to it.
    Never give up just keep going.............

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    Re: Demension.

    darkness is a visual interpritation of evil/fear.
    it is that person going to hell...
    and i can write poems if so requested. PM me and i will see what i can do.

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    Re: Demension.

    Thanks for granting my request starfire..^^
    i owe alot!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
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    Re: Demension.

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Thanks for granting my request starfire..^^
    i owe alot!
    any time just ask and i shall grant. i hope she liked it

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