Rave.................. this is very dark.
Okay this is a poem I just made, about someone who's dying.
War, death, gloom everywhere,
The stench of blood filling the air,
The sight of defeat seems to come near,
I sit in a corner, armed, praying for my life
I can see the writing on the wall,
Everything I dreamed for, is going to fall,
Why God? Why? I followed your steps ...
Where have they escorted me?
Now I follow my fate,
Leading me to near oblivion ...
Yup it's in a war. Its kind of dark.
Opinions, suggestions and comments!
Yeah I know, it's related to something recent. Anyways, any more comments
I really liked it. I love dark poetry.
Wow,that's really kool Ravey. I liked it alot
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
nice dark poem...
i like it ^_^
Woah, this rates with the poems wrote during WWII. This is dark yet gd. Keep it up.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra