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    Re: Demise

    never knew u were dark rave....o well....maybe everyone has their dark side....*grins evily*....

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    lol it was a pretty kool dark/sad/emo poem man, keep it up.

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    Re: Demise

    wow very dark rave and yet very cool

    Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
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    Re: Demise

    Is it realy darK? ......... I thought it was quite normal, actually..... I might be reading one too many war poems........

    Anyway, thats really great, especially the layout. Its really short, and full of meaning, just the way I like my poems
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    Re: Demise

    it is dark but i kinda like dark poems better, i relate to them better =P. Anyway good job keep at it =).

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    Re: Demise

    rave thats dark but its the truth sadly enough. anyways its really good dude i like it

    IM BACK

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    Re: Demise

    Thought you told me that you cannot write poetry. Haha. Trying to be humble, I suppose. Anyway!

    Neat choice of words there. Very meaningful, and applies to the real world. I really like the way how you worked out till the end with this poem. Neatly written! Keep up the great work. Keep 'em coming. ^_^

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    Thank you everyones for the comments, watch out for more of my work!

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