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    the demon

    Your back again my demon friend,
    Telling me my life should end,
    "COME ON"you say "DON'T BE WEAK,
    TAKE THE BLADE AND PUSH IT DEEP
    ".
    What about all those who care,
    Don't you think thats quite unfair?

    "DON'T BE NAIVE YOU STUPID SOUL,
    IF THEY CARE SO MUCH WHERE ARE THEY NOW,
    NO-ONE REALLY WANTS YOU HERE
    THEY WON'T EVEN SHED A TEAR,
    YOU REALLY DON'T HAVE ANY CHOICE,
    COME ON BEFORE I RAISE MY VOICE".

    You really think its for the best?
    "JUST TRUST ME YOU COULD USE THE REST,
    NO-ONE WANTS YOU MOPPING AROUND,
    YOU DRIVE THEM MAD YOU BRING THEM DOWN,
    THEY'LL BE GLAD WHEN YOU ARE GONE,
    SO WHAT'S THE POINT OF HANGING ON"?

    "TRUST ME I'M YOUR ONLY FRIEND,
    I'LL BE THERE TILL THE VERY END".

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    Re: the demon

    This is a great poem, I read it with great interest... You really cought my attention... It's a wonderful work You've done here!
    It's really interesting... made me smile somewhere and be sad somewhere else... the dialogue between the lyrical me and it's demon was really intense and I admire the fact that you've cought the feelings of the moment in this poem...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    thank you, I'm happy you liked the poem and you know about the feeling I put into it.

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    This is a good poem!!!!!! This poem reminds me of my past time!!!! I hope to see more of your fantastic work in the future!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    This poem his magnificent it took my breath I hope you make another one like it.
    Your soul is now mine...

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    Wow that is a super good poem! I wish I could write poems like that. Keep it up and don't no matter what

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    Re: the demon

    Wow good poem keep it up! I found this poem very interesting Reminds me of how I use to feel.

    *~A moment like this we will never be able to go back. Holding you like this wanting the time to stop. Just the two of us we don't need words.~*

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    awwww i really like this pome. its very good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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