So it begins
it rises high
It's time to die
My first breath
begets your last
the shreak of death
begets my laugh
F*** your preaching
In the mind
Through the deepened sigh
Turning and turning
time to fear
Burning and burning
Your demon's here.
great poem the use of anger
in the form of demons is pretty cool
atleast thats what i get from it , and the
explanation makes it easy to understand
if im wrong about this sorry but i got
this idea from your poem and i love it
Just an excellent poem!!!
The rhythm of this poem is nice and neat
and the poem plots is trim and simple but you definitely express your anger clearly and thoroughly...
Very nice job!!!
it is to show how on the inside can turn someone on the outside
Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice