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    Demonizing

    A growl
    from with-in
    One howl
    So it begins

    New anger
    it rises high
    Formidable stranger
    It's time to die

    My first breath
    begets your last
    the shreak of death
    begets my laugh

    Blood drawn
    Claws screeching
    New dawn
    F*** your preaching

    Evil explodes
    In the mind
    Good-ness erodes
    Through the deepened sigh

    Turning and turning
    time to fear
    Burning and burning
    Your demon's here.

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    Re: Demonizing

    great poem the use of anger
    in the form of demons is pretty cool
    atleast thats what i get from it , and the
    explanation makes it easy to understand
    i think.

    if im wrong about this sorry but i got
    this idea from your poem and i love it
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Demonizing

    Just an excellent poem!!!
    The rhythm of this poem is nice and neat
    and the poem plots is trim and simple but you definitely express your anger clearly and thoroughly...
    Very nice job!!!
    DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON

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    Re: Demonizing

    Quote Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice View Post
    great poem the use of anger
    in the form of demons is pretty cool
    atleast thats what i get from it , and the
    explanation makes it easy to understand
    i think.

    if im wrong about this sorry but i got
    this idea from your poem and i love it
    it is to show how on the inside can turn someone on the outside

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