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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Depression + Alcohol = poems! I wrote two poems last night because I was a bit tipsy and depressed about life. First one is about the city I live in.(its in so cal), and again a poem to that girl. Rette Mich Rette Mich I'm lost in the darkness. The darkness isn't so dark, just it burns to open my eyes. I yell out for someone, anyone. But I'm still lost. Rette Mich As the darkness lifts, I see the sun. But the sun isn't what you would see. It was the same and dull every morning. Rette Mich Even in the city little life is seen. People walk by and stare at me for my face, it must because I have features on them. Everyone dresses alike as well. The same designer clothing with a red arm band that bears and elephant, with their flat, white, faceless face. RETTE MICH! RETTE MICH! Meine brennede Liebe für Du Young love is dangerous by itself. But mix fire, a torret of flames is in himself. Meine It was foolish of me to think that way. So today I pay. Brennede I was never in the same league as you. But I did the things I do. Liebe I drink the moldy yeast to forget. But it only seems I forget my regret. Für Today, I want to be that cat that sits on your lap. But all that is crap. Du And now I sit here waiting for that call. As I down this alcohol. A toast to you!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 877 | Re: Depression + Alcohol = poems! Repetition! I hardly see enough these days. ![]() Nice poems Creesco. This was written beautifully, for one so tipsy. O.o
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![]() ![]() Credits: 4,237 | Re: Depression + Alcohol = poems! I love tipsy poems ^^ They work out so great and show true meaning! The rhyming is great! I prefer you second poem, it appealed to me more! Keep writing!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 210 | Re: Depression + Alcohol = poems! hooray for spell check! thanks for comments.
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