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 Credits: 2,080 | Desire Desire Longing for what I can not have Desire Holding it with my spirit To see the charm in my mind Desire Forcing the changes Upon the fate That many people have accepted Desire Cursing the past that darkness dwells Blessing the future that light lives in Desire Freeing my soul into the shadows.
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Apr 22, 2008, 01:56 PM
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Credits: 24,113 | Re: Desire Very well written hope you continue to write poems to express yourself.
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Apr 23, 2008, 08:49 AM
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Credits: 2,080 | Re: Desire Thank you PhoenixSara. I do have more poems here on AO.
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Apr 23, 2008, 10:40 AM
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Credits: 14,011 | Re: Desire good poem there is alot of poems written about that topic but your is really good and up near the top. (a little short just by a bit..)
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Apr 23, 2008, 11:40 AM
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Credits: 2,080 | Re: Desire I can not do ballets like some of the greats but I find that I have my own way of seeing things and I try to express them in words.
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Apr 23, 2008, 03:03 PM
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Credits: 14,011 | Re: Desire I'm not saying you cann't just saying it looks a little short... but sometimes short and powerfull is good
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Apr 24, 2008, 12:59 PM
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Credits: 2,080 | Re: Desire Thank you Aiora. I write what I feel(some people saying that I am calivoitent{sp}. I do own tarot cards, thought).
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Apr 24, 2008, 02:11 PM
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Credits: 2,960 | Re: Desire I can relate to this poem aswell... I look forward to seeing more of your work
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Apr 24, 2008, 05:37 PM
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Credits: 2,080 | Re: Desire Thank you all I will write more in a while so be patented.(sp)
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