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    Desire

    Desire
    Longing for what I can not have

    Desire
    Holding it with my spirit
    To see the charm in my mind

    Desire
    Forcing the changes
    Upon the fate
    That many people have accepted

    Desire
    Cursing the past that darkness dwells
    Blessing the future that light lives in

    Desire
    Freeing my soul into the shadows.
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    Re: Desire

    Very well written hope you continue to write poems to express yourself.
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    Re: Desire

    Thank you PhoenixSara. I do have more poems here on AO.
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    Re: Desire

    good poem there is alot of poems written about that topic but your is really good and up near the top. (a little short just by a bit..)
    death and life are one and the same

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    Re: Desire

    I can not do ballets like some of the greats but I find that I have my own way of seeing things and I try to express them in words.
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    Re: Desire

    I'm not saying you cann't just saying it looks a little short... but sometimes short and powerfull is good
    death and life are one and the same

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    Re: Desire

    Quote Originally Posted by Dragon Born View Post
    Desire
    Longing for what I can not have

    Desire
    Holding it with my spirit
    To see the charm in my mind

    Desire
    Forcing the changes
    Upon the fate
    That many people have accepted

    Desire
    Cursing the past that darkness dwells
    Blessing the future that light lives in

    Desire
    Freeing my soul into the shadows.
    ah very nice, i see i can relate to this poem somehow..with my past tragedies and such..and my current happiness...good job


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    Re: Desire

    Thank you Aiora. I write what I feel(some people saying that I am calivoitent{sp}. I do own tarot cards, thought).
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