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    Desire, Lust, Love

    Everyday I watch how you rise,
    Walking, knowing how I like to watch.
    Your beauty whether walking towards me or away,
    It's still the same thig to me,
    It is you that I desire to be with,
    Your smell, your touch, your taste.

    Everytime as our body touch each other,
    Our hands running along our skin,
    Our tongues dancing with each other,
    The taste of your skin is almost drug-like,
    As I look up and return the look of desire,
    As we become one, our senses heighten.

    Like a dance we desire to do everyday,
    Always starting off slow and lovingly,
    Then we start to go faster like the Tango,
    Sharp, lustful,
    As our bodies press against each other,
    Then as the dance gets to a dizzy pace,
    It stops,
    As we lay beside each other,
    We whisper love words to each other,
    Like love birds singing to each other,
    The desire to be with be together.

    i dunno if this is pushing it a bit but anyways plz comment

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    very bold and very true man love dont get much better than this
    its pushing the envolope in a very awesome way blade man i cant belive
    your the first to write a pome this bold and the hole toung thing been there
    your right its just like dancing very cool poem
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    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    I'll give you an Average gred.... Not bad at all^^

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    Emn... I think it's interesting....
    Carve an amble now,
    Saying that the day's still bright,
    And let's play with time.

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    I think it was good, but I think I like your past poems more...

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    ::throws a blanket over the poem::

    NOthing to see here people, keep walking! Keep walking. XD

    >_< Darn Jason !

    I like this poem. It shows how some guys are.

    Because I am so Drug like for my man!

    Great poem, and yes very bold. ^_~
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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    dont litsen to the haters girl thats a bad poem

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    Re: Desire, Lust, Love

    ahem.......how do u think it's bad? plz do give me some constructive criticisms

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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