Desolated

Shu · Nov 04, 2006, 09:56 AM

I'm so lost,
I'm barely here,
I wish I could explain myself
The words escape me,
It's too late,
To save me,
You're too late,
You're too late...

LostbutFound · Nov 04, 2006, 10:02 AM

shu whats wrong your poem seems sorta sad PM message me okay kool poem

BlueFox1 · Nov 06, 2006, 09:31 AM

The poems short and I would like more of a picture to know what is going on with you, but my guess is it's personal and I don't want to impose. Nice job with this type of poem!

Nov 04, 2006, 09:56 AM	#1 (permalink)
Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 749	Desolated I'm so lost, I'm barely here, I wish I could explain myself The words escape me, It's too late, To save me, You're too late, You're too late...
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Nov 04, 2006, 10:02 AM	#2 (permalink)
LostbutFound Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Oct 2006 Location: Behind you ...........boo Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 814	Re: Desolated shu whats wrong your poem seems sorta sad PM message me okay kool poem __________________ Ok in order to judge other you first have to be able to judge yourself, then we must all except each others as equals
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Nov 06, 2006, 09:31 AM	#3 (permalink)
BlueFox1 Upcoming Legend Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility Posts: 584 Thanks: 8 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts Credits: 1,176	Re: Desolated The poems short and I would like more of a picture to know what is going on with you, but my guess is it's personal and I don't want to impose. Nice job with this type of poem! __________________
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