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    Despondency

    Me, here is me
    A loner, looser, a worthless person
    No, not even a person … I am nothing
    Say whatever you want, tell me whatever you wish to
    Inside, I know I am nothing

    Just a cold hearted person,
    Just a selfish person,
    Just a ruthless, uncaring, hopeless, wild
    … Just a useless creation

    Tears roll down my face …
    One, two, three, four … a whole river of tears
    What is my purpose? Am I just God’s dummy?
    Oh … look at me, just crying … why the heck am I crying?
    Just like a baby … I wish I could just die and get this over with

    There were many times when I almost died … but why the hell am I alive?
    More tears roll down my face,
    Pain runs through my heart,
    Thoughts fill up my mind
    Sadness builds up inside me

    They say I am one of a kind
    Am I really? Hell no!
    I don’t even have a purpose …
    They say I look good, but looks can be deceiving
    I’m meant to be this way …

    I ask myself all these questions
    Questions that build up inside my mind
    But still I can find no peace
    Not even my conscience could keep up with my …
    Despondency

    I would punch myself,
    Punish myself for my sins,
    Starve myself with intent to torture myself,
    Slap myself till my body went numb
    Cry till my eyes went sore and red

    I couldn’t be a perfect child,
    I couldn’t keep my parents happy,
    I gave beatings to my brother …


    Yet I found no purpose,
    No matter how hard I tried,
    No matter how glad I would be for my life,
    No matter how many times I tried to calm myself …

    I find no meaning behind my stupid life …
    I thought I could be a better person

    Darn this world,
    Darn this body,
    Darn this soul
    Darn this incompetent life!

    To HELL with all the rubbish!
    This life is NOTHING! I still cry,
    I am crying now
    I … just wish … THIS WOULD ALL BE OVER!
    Enough of this pain!
    I am ending it now, here. Goodbye world …
    Feh, nobody gives a damn …
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    Re: Despondency

    Wow the poem has a life of it's own! Every word you wrote says exactly how you feel! How you feel that you have no purpose, no meaning. How you torment yourself and others around you, and also how you feel in your own eyes! Awesome this one deserves a 5 star rating and that's what I'm giving it! Truly enjoyed this poem, because I felt like that before!

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    Re: Despondency

    this poem it's really good, i know what you are going through... it's like... no matter what you do, it's just not good enough for those persons you care... you feel like there's no meaning to your life, no purpose to yourself... it's damn good (: keep it up & write more.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

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    Re: Despondency

    To HELL with all the rubbish!
    This life is NOTHING! I still cry,
    I am crying now
    I … just wish … THIS WOULD ALL BE OVER!
    Enough of this pain!
    I am ending it now, here. Goodbye world …
    Feh, nobody gives a damn …

    i love the despair in he verse its like i really feel
    that way and life does have these kind of moments
    but its how we handle them that makes life good or
    bad you shows the perfect way to do it wrong,very awesome
    poem i liked it alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Despondency

    great poem, raw emotions and sincere. really liked it. keep writing.
    I'll be your hope, i'll be your wish, i'll be everything that you need...
    I'm gonna take your soul out of your body-Hikaru&Shia
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    Shia i lovez ya! and ya poems!
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    Re: Despondency

    the poem is writent nice but its making me feel un confterbal like u are ganna ... well u know kill ur self...

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    Re: Despondency

    No Hawkie ... no I just wrote what people go through in their lives ... and after 20 minutes ... it's here ^_^

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    Re: Despondency

    hmph (concentrate)
    wow this is really good
    this poem is like just putting all ur anger and emotion there...
    bloody poem weee its greatsa



    perdoname michelle!

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