Uh huh!?! So this is what you been talking about... Just to let you know I hate you right now, (well not really/just jk)lol... If I really didn't know you then I wouldn't know that you would give your last, if I didn't know you I wouldn't know that you have a good soul... You are a person that I thank God for placing you in my life.... Plzbaleeve!!! LOL
Well about your poem: I don't know if this is how you feel now or if it is something in the past, since you have been closed up lately.. *Hint* open up a lil' more...lol I remember you told me about the bad news you received on the day of Christmas of 05' from your father and I am wondering if that is the "curse" you are talking about in which you are calling your "Nightmare before Christmas"??? (And you say I don't know you)lol I can see that you have some crazy word play in these two writings, also you tried to include the 7 sins in the "Devil Eyes", which was kind of unique the way you included it in your sight... (Ha!! Thought I didn't see that) :P The only negative about it is some of the grammar, but knowing you- you write the way you talk in which you have that bad, but what you probably tell me is "you are not writing an essay, you are writing your feelings"...lol Oh yea' the other negative thing I have is it is kind of scary reading it cause, since I know you I know that you be thinking crazy and you really will make yourself believe that you are alone... But know that you are not cause you ALWAYS have me... *now smile for me cause I am smiling for you*
But all in all it is a good read, cause now I have a little insight on what you been thinking about lately... Thanks for letting me know that you finished your work... I am glad to see that you picked up a pen again... Can't wait to see more...TTYS!!! Much Luv'!!!