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    devins poem plz comment

    suicide

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    my 2nd poem


    my wrists full of scars
    in the shape of six point stars
    the bleeding again it starts
    my blood all over the car

    a uniformed man walks to me
    my wrists he wants to see
    he makes me take off my white tee
    i think hes going to strip search me

    the scars on my legs have
    the suicide hotline number
    in their scars

    but i cant call now because
    im behind padded bars

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    Re: devins poem plz comment

    didnt you post this already? but still
    this poem is really good and full of depression
    and hwo you are feeling during the suicide
    is a really cool point of view.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: devins poem plz comment

    you posted this poem already whats the point in that its a great poem and all but posting it two times is pointless



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