society dedicates who we are.
they cause our hearthache,were left with scars
i hate all the labells!!
i hate all the names!!
all they do is cause suffering and pain.
the goth wears black
has piercings and tattoos
but when she goes home
she gets abused.
she wears all blck to mach her bruise.
the prep she's a cheerleader
she's got a reputation for being mean
she goes for a ride in her boyfriends car.
who is he? the football star.
when they go out she is abused she wears all the makeup to hide her bruise
the geeks,they wear glasses
they feel so alone
they try to hide in their own little zone
when they go to school,
they get abused
for them life sucks
but what else is new?
we arent so different u and me
you may be a slut
you may be a freak
you may be a prep
you may be a geek
you may be a goth
you may be a priss
none of that matters
what matters,is we all need help.
Lovely absoultly amazing well done i'm glad you made it longer and not TOO long exclent, im guessing you enjoyed writing that!
please comment it and rate it tnx ♥ da princessa p.s. make sure you pm me need more network friends
Ok i rate this 9.5 out of 10 and i will add you to my network :smile:
Yah that's right ...:2thumbs:
This poem different from the feeling and It's long wow great job...so if i will rate you I will give you *cookies*...keep it up...
hope to see more..iluvmyloser...
theprincess, uh, if you post anymore, you'll get in trouble just like I just did lol!
This is so AMAZING!!!!! Really!!!!! I just love this poem really!!!!!!! I just loved it cause it just explains a lot of things to me and it's just so AWESOME!!!! I hope to see more! :D:
It was okay good at best but keep writing and you well get better