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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    Wink different?

    prep,goth,punk,geek
    slut,stupid,loser,freak
    society dedicates who we are.
    they cause our hearthache,were left with scars
    i hate all the labells!!
    i hate all the names!!
    all they do is cause suffering and pain.

    the goth wears black
    has piercings and tattoos
    but when she goes home
    she gets abused.
    she wears all blck to mach her bruise.

    the prep she's a cheerleader
    homecoming queen
    she's got a reputation for being mean
    she goes for a ride in her boyfriends car.
    who is he? the football star.
    when they go out she is abused she wears all the makeup to hide her bruise


    the geeks,they wear glasses
    they feel so alone
    they try to hide in their own little zone
    when they go to school,
    they get abused
    for them life sucks
    but what else is new?

    we arent so different u and me
    you may be a slut
    you may be a freak
    you may be a prep
    you may be a geek
    you may be a goth
    you may be a priss
    none of that matters
    what matters,is we all need help.
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: different?.........

    Lovely absoultly amazing well done i'm glad you made it longer and not TOO long exclent, im guessing you enjoyed writing that!

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    Àddïctëd tø |ăüghïñg :) Sonny Sunshine Champion, Volcano Champion, Aquarium Sprengischen Champion, Spiderman Web of Words Champion, Look Alive Champion iluvmyloser is off to a good start iluvmyloser's Avatar
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    please comment it and rate it tnx ♥ da princessa p.s. make sure you pm me need more network friends
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    Ok i rate this 9.5 out of 10 and i will add you to my network

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    Re: different?.........

    Yah that's right ...
    This poem different from the feeling and It's long wow great job...so if i will rate you I will give you *cookies*...keep it up...
    hope to see more..iluvmyloser...

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    theprincess, uh, if you post anymore, you'll get in trouble just like I just did lol!



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    This is so AMAZING!!!!! Really!!!!! I just love this poem really!!!!!!! I just loved it cause it just explains a lot of things to me and it's just so AWESOME!!!! I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: different?.........

    It was okay good at best but keep writing and you well get better

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