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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,028 | A different line poem s(e mp tyn ess of the sou l) ad ness You will get this one if you read it correctly! It is based off something I am studying in English. |
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![]() ![]() Credits: 15,852 | Re: A different line poem Interesting style; reminds me of e.e. cummings. You do have to be careful with this kind of writing, though, as going overboard with the word separation could make it nearly impossible to read. But you've done well in keeping it short and understandable. |
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![]() Credits: 4,564 | Re: A different line poem >.< wasnt sure what I was looking at at first never seen someone write like that before but I got it and now when I look at it I cant see it any other way its cool I like this >.< the message is very simple but it relays a whole load of emotions and feeling so good job
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![]() Credits: 49,365 | Re: A different line poem De Ja Vu again... I can aswear I saw this poem in the past... the same words on the same font.. But it couldn't be... Hmmm... Ok whatever about that, I really like how you've done this, it's really interesting and will make you to look and think and create an opinion! Also it's great that you've been able to put such a deep thought in so little words... |
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![]() Credits: 13,226 | Re: A different line poem What an awesome style! Seriously. I like this poem a lot! ![]()
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![]() Credits: 236 | Re: A different line poem I second the motion from the above post. It also is a deep meaning of sadness, which hits the marker. I hope I get to read more of your works.
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![]() Credits: 180 | Re: A different line poem OH woa duh thats cool. I started at the letters for like 5 minutes probably drooling trying to figure it out. i got it though thats a cool way of writing. pretty short poem. is it really a poem? like a puzzle poem. anyway way cool.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 14,865 | Re: A different line poem Two lines... no wait. Sadness - Emptiness of soul. Never knew this existed. Nice job I guess ^_^
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,028 | Re: A different line poem Wow, I love how complicated a 4 word poem can be! I was going to make a longer one later if you guys like this one. |
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