Thread: A different line poem

Interesting style; reminds me of e.e. cummings. You do have to be careful with this kind of writing, though, as going overboard with the word separation could make it nearly impossible to read. But you've done well in keeping it short and understandable.

>.< wasnt sure what I was looking at at first
never seen someone write like that before
but I got it and now when I look at it I cant see it any other way
its cool I like this >.<
the message is very simple
but it relays a whole load of emotions and feeling
so good job

Originally Posted by gren

Interesting style; reminds me of e.e. cummings. You do have to be careful with this kind of writing, though, as going overboard with the word separation could make it nearly impossible to read. But you've done well in keeping it short and understandable.

Aye, I'd like to see what else you can come up with using this style.

De Ja Vu again... I can aswear I saw this poem in the past... the same words on the same font.. But it couldn't be... Hmmm...
Ok whatever about that, I really like how you've done this, it's really interesting and will make you to look and think and create an opinion! Also it's great that you've been able to put such a deep thought in so little words...

What an awesome style! Seriously. I like this poem a lot!

Nice one, Mattness. Style is interesting, and I like the way you wrote the 'definition' inside of the actual word. Very creative.

I second the motion from the above post. It also is a deep meaning of sadness, which hits the marker. I hope I get to read more of your works.