Excuse my lateness! ... (havent been on for a while).
Just thouhgt I'd tell you, I thought this was one of your best for sure. I've felt EXACTLY this way about many "dirty old men" I've encountered.
"Ripping those dirty words from your mouth.
Next comes your tongue, tugged and then severed.
And you'll say no more, forever."
There was such a passionate loathing in this. I could feel it as if I was the one with the bleeding knife. Kudos.
