Peach_follows

Excuse my lateness! ... (havent been on for a while).

Just thouhgt I'd tell you, I thought this was one of your best for sure. I've felt EXACTLY this way about many "dirty old men" I've encountered.

"Ripping those dirty words from your mouth.
Next comes your tongue, tugged and then severed.
And you'll say no more, forever."

There was such a passionate loathing in this. I could feel it as if I was the one with the bleeding knife. Kudos.

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bratling

Woo. I'm so proud thaat you found this such a good poem. Thank you so much for your comments.

That's my favorite line in that poem. <3

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She's always trying not to cry.
But I can see the demons in her eyes.
She's always trying not to yell.
But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.