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    Re: Dirty old man.

    Excuse my lateness! ... (havent been on for a while).

    Just thouhgt I'd tell you, I thought this was one of your best for sure. I've felt EXACTLY this way about many "dirty old men" I've encountered.

    "Ripping those dirty words from your mouth.
    Next comes your tongue, tugged and then severed.
    And you'll say no more, forever."

    There was such a passionate loathing in this. I could feel it as if I was the one with the bleeding knife. Kudos.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Dirty old man.

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    Excuse my lateness! ... (havent been on for a while).

    Just thouhgt I'd tell you, I thought this was one of your best for sure. I've felt EXACTLY this way about many "dirty old men" I've encountered.

    "Ripping those dirty words from your mouth.
    Next comes your tongue, tugged and then severed.
    And you'll say no more, forever."

    There was such a passionate loathing in this. I could feel it as if I was the one with the bleeding knife. Kudos.
    Woo. I'm so proud thaat you found this such a good poem. Thank you so much for your comments.

    That's my favorite line in that poem. <3

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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