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    Disappear

    I'm unclean a libertine
    and everytime you
    vent your spleen
    I seem to lose the
    power of speech
    you're slipping slowly
    from my reach
    you grow me like
    an evergreen
    you've never seen the
    lonely me at all

    special thx to tracy
    Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!

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    Re: Disappear

    Quote Originally Posted by hyuuga13 View Post
    I'm unclean a libertine
    and everytime you
    vent your spleen
    I seem to lose the
    power of speech
    you're slipping slowly
    from my reach
    you grow me like
    an evergreen
    you've never seen the
    lonely me at all

    special thx to tracy
    que le paso a su pasion chicos!!

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    Re: Disappear

    very short but very good...and... wat Baal said


    thank u SasuraiHell
    go -=NOOBZ=- clan!

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    Re: Disappear

    good and NOT TOO SHORT. i like 'em like this b/c most long ones lose my attention.

    thanks to zyta for the sick sig and avy!

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    Re: Disappear

    Quote Originally Posted by N!tr0-Glyc3r1n View Post
    very short but very good...and... wat Baal said
    i said what hapend with ur passion dudes
    i mean there good but short.



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Disappear

    Was indeed a bit short but was well written none-the-less. Great flow ^.^
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    Re: Disappear

    thank you i really appreciate the critism but the poem was not mine but a friends. she wrote it to me. i thought i would share it with you guys.
    Why is everything so ****ing hard for me? Keep me down to what you think I should be! Must you tempt me and provoke the ministry? Keep on trying I'm not dying so easily!

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    Re: Disappear

    as long as the fire still there it doesn't matter how short they are just let it flow!

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