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    I can't understand,
    what is what you want,
    i really just don't,
    i don't want to speak anymore...

    And i cannot say another word,
    i'm leaving tonight,
    one last fight,
    one last tear,
    is this what i feared?
    it doesn't matters,
    i'm gonna run away,
    and never wonder why i never said good bye.
    I won't ever look back.

    One last time,
    i had enough,
    to you i may not be though,
    but i have my limits,
    that i didn't showed,
    you can't understand,
    that i am really cold,
    for me it may be all,
    though that's impossible,
    i'm nothing,
    i'm numb,
    and like this it will remain,
    i don't care about my pain,
    i even feel vain.

    I truly don't feel,
    i myself am not real,
    i'm just an empty body,
    that searchs for glory,
    excellence,
    and perfection.
    I can't even see my own reflextion,
    it doesn't exists,
    i'm just a lie,
    living to fill the void,
    that's inside of my core.
    I died for my pride,
    that is where the truth lies.

    I have to vanish,
    and disappear,
    it's all for good,
    believe me,
    it is...

    I will never return,
    and you won't notice my absence,
    and i'm glad for it,
    it's how things are supposed to be.
    You will never see the real me,
    so this is me cuting my hands
    and setting me free...
    Last edited by KuRuMi ^.^ [くるみ] NoiR; Sep 13, 2006 at 01:36 PM.
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Disappear

    omg!!! i really really liked it!!! this is damn good, i enjoyed every phrase of it, it's likez you are runnin away from urselfz, you just gotta leave and end it all for good. I like all that you write, sometimes it doesn't makes much sense, but i can feel your emotions, and get what you mean. likez it alotz!! keep it up!
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    Awesome! You really put your emotions into it, and I adore it! KEep it up!!

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    Re: Disappear

    You did really good I like it. Oh please don't cut my hands.^_^
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    hahaha, i won't cut ur hands! XD it says " this is me cuting my hands and setting me free..." teehee
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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    Re: Disappear

    Wow! This was very good KuRuMi,I liked it alot! The emotions were so strong! This was truly a wonderful poem that you have wrote. Awesome job!
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Well My Angel you have done it again!!! I loved every word of this one! I could feel the emotion and pain that flow so wonderfully in this one as they always do! Angel you ROCK!!! Keep up the good work and you know that your loyal fan will be waiting on the next one!

    Beautiful Angel!

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    thanx so much to all! i really apreciatte ur comments (:
    Carpe Diem. Quam minimum credula postero! (:

    Wishing, waiting, dreaming..

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