Disregardful Your times with me have been happy and curious about you.
The times we were together have been nearly decades, and
I thank you for the greatness you have given me.
Now the times have been becoming difficult to see each
Other, since we are becoming apart from our distances.
Where is the life of regretting things we have not
Spoken of yet?
The good times we had spent in each others arms was mesmerizing.
Has everything i done made it for us to talk less in each other?
Each passing day we made it less to see each others face.
The last moment i saw you come in my arms was in desperate times.
In the few words i mentioned to you was regretful in my heart.
My life was disregarded into for you making a wise descision.
Every single time i tried to hold you, made it impossible for the passing moment.
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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regret is a poison that kills
the heart quicker than anything
and in those passiing moment when
all seems to be fleeting the regret
is strongest.
this poemreallyis aweosme
and i love how you wrote it
i feel guilty and i didnt even do anything
thats for me is one hell of a poem .
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
dark1angel (Jan 29, 2008)
For me i tried aiming it for a good perspective view on how i wrote this poem out first in binder paper after i had to edit some stuff out i would get different results such as getting a clear persuasion on how apart i was from this person and that i was not able to get close to the person i cared truly about her in this type of situation.Originally Posted by HolderOfTheDarkChalice
So i think in this matter the poem i wrote out was my orginal and best one from all other ones that i created in the past.
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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well you did very good in bringing it out
in this poem though i understand what your
going through and it sucks but you did learn from it
ad you cantask formore than that so it want happen
again
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Well everything in what you spoke of may be true, though somewhere from the heart may be simply be unreliable on what this poem is trying to convince because is not up to the person that critizes it only you have the choice into saying on how the details of the poem has been speaking of.
Also in my point of view with the poem i clarified in was that anyone that goes through the same situation i have gone through can simply avoid the problems that come in life that is how i can reduce the point of my direction.
Magic intervenes when there is love in first sight.
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