I'm on my knees,
help me if I bleed.
These chains are cutting me deeper,
if only I could meet her.
We are divided by time,
where the "subliminal verses" lie.
There's no time to cry,
I am an emotional mess.
in this lonely world I feel like dirt.
Slicing myself with your words,
hearing your annoying verses.
You've put me under many curses,
every day it worsens.
I wish I had help,
I'm feeling my blood run cold.
These rymes are getting old,
my body is decaying.
I hear those damn christians praying,
but it won't bring me back.
nice......................................that sounds like the stuff i wrote last year before i found sometihng to live for..........:smile:
Nice poem,but kinda sad. Good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
Very nice! I plan on reading more. Keep up the good work.
hey sprout if you plan to read my poems you have to be on everyday because I'm posting everyday
I like your writings... They all seem dark, and that's my favorite kind of poetry. I like it from begining to end. ^_^
Originally Posted by flaminghate
I'm on everyday. I may not post as much as most people, but I'm always here. I'll subscribe to this forum so I can keep myself up to date.