nice......................................that sounds like the stuff i wrote last year before i found sometihng to live for..........![]()
I'm on my knees,
help me if I bleed.
These chains are cutting me deeper,
if only I could meet her.
We are divided by time,
where the "subliminal verses" lie.
There's no time to cry,
I am an emotional mess.
Forever depressed,
in this lonely world I feel like dirt.
Slicing myself with your words,
hearing your annoying verses.
You've put me under many curses,
every day it worsens.
I wish I had help,
I'm feeling my blood run cold.
These rymes are getting old,
my body is decaying.
I hear those damn christians praying,
but it won't bring me back.
Last edited by flaminghate; Feb 07, 2007 at 09:15 PM.
nice......................................that sounds like the stuff i wrote last year before i found sometihng to live for..........![]()
Neji hates when i hug other people.......
he'll hit you with a hammer if he sees you....
Nice poem,but kinda sad. Good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
"Sunset Kisses Along The Beach"
Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice
Thanks so much I love it!
Very nice! I plan on reading more. Keep up the good work.
hey sprout if you plan to read my poems you have to be on everyday because I'm posting everyday
I like your writings... They all seem dark, and that's my favorite kind of poetry. I like it from begining to end. ^_^
Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.
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