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    Distance

    I'm on my knees,
    help me if I bleed.

    These chains are cutting me deeper,
    if only I could meet her.

    We are divided by time,
    where the "subliminal verses" lie.

    There's no time to cry,
    I am an emotional mess.

    Forever depressed,
    in this lonely world I feel like dirt.

    Slicing myself with your words,
    hearing your annoying verses.

    You've put me under many curses,
    every day it worsens.

    I wish I had help,
    I'm feeling my blood run cold.

    These rymes are getting old,
    my body is decaying.

    I hear those damn christians praying,
    but it won't bring me back.
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    nice......................................that sounds like the stuff i wrote last year before i found sometihng to live for..........

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    Re: Distance

    Nice poem,but kinda sad. Good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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    Re: Distance

    Very nice! I plan on reading more. Keep up the good work.


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    Re: Distance

    hey sprout if you plan to read my poems you have to be on everyday because I'm posting everyday

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    Re: Distance

    I like your writings... They all seem dark, and that's my favorite kind of poetry. I like it from begining to end. ^_^

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    Re: Distance

    Quote Originally Posted by flaminghate View Post
    hey sprout if you plan to read my poems you have to be on everyday because I'm posting everyday

    I'm on everyday. I may not post as much as most people, but I'm always here. I'll subscribe to this forum so I can keep myself up to date.


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