Thousands of miles away,
yet we are tied to a red thread.
Our hearts wild and young.
Knows no meaning of giving up.
You are here and yet you are there,
by my side but so far from my sight.
We may be far,
but they all can never see our true distance.
distant star over the horizon.
The goddess over the seas,
my prayers are never adequate.
I am sorry for my offering for now can only be this mere words,
truly just for you, thank you...
After a long while since I last posted any poems in here... o.O I finally got one in.. xD oh well.. do comment about your opinions in this one.. I need reviews on my mistakes and suggestions! ^^
I like this line. Great way to use the reference of a Goddess as someone you love but not too awkward.
Originally Posted by RayMe