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    Distance


    Distance :

    Thousands of miles away,
    yet we are tied to a red thread.

    Our hearts wild and young.
    Knows no meaning of giving up.

    You are here and yet you are there,
    by my side but so far from my sight.

    We may be far,
    but they all can never see our true distance.

    The shining,
    distant star over the horizon.

    The goddess over the seas,
    my prayers are never adequate.

    I am sorry for my offering for now can only be this mere words,
    truly just for you, thank you...

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    Re: Distance

    Quote Originally Posted by RayMe View Post

    The goddess over the seas,
    my prayers are never adequate.
    I like this line. Great way to use the reference of a Goddess as someone you love but not too awkward.

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