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    Divination

    Trap our tears
    to
    Hide our fears,
    And kiss the sorrow.

    I've sought,
    In
    Hollow thought
    The breath of tomorrow-
    Silent shadow,
    Your breath is shallow.

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    Re: Divination

    Quote Originally Posted by BrightShadow_96 View Post
    Trap our tears
    to
    Hide our fears,
    And kiss the sorrow.

    I've sought,
    In
    Hollow thought
    The breath of tomorrow-
    Silent shadow,
    Your breath is shallow.
    I like your poem. The first part of your poem is really deep, but i'm confused about the second part of your poem.

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    Re: Divination

    Quote Originally Posted by YaoiLover View Post
    I like your poem. The first part of your poem is really deep, but i'm confused about the second part of your poem.
    It is talking about wondering what is going to come tomorrow. "I have sought in hollow thought the breath of tomorrow." "Your breath is shallow" refers to the future being bleak.

    I actually think the second stanza is deeper than the first one.

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