Diving with my thoughts

kikia · Feb 10, 2007, 11:40 AM

Diving with my thoughts
Falling from the sky
we all wonder why
we try not to cry
but....
it's hard to watch someone die

*Mr. K* · Feb 10, 2007, 11:49 AM

indeed true, but different when you make it out to be everyone, and not just you.

Nice Poem, I wish it was a bite longer thou, seems like it ended to soon

^^

CherryBlossom18 · Feb 10, 2007, 08:17 PM

Nice poem,but it could've been a little longer. Good job though.

Darkened_Star · Feb 10, 2007, 10:43 PM

Though your poem is short, it's still good. I like it. It sort of reminded me of a poem my friend wrote. She's a good writter too.^_^ Looking forward to reading more of your works! ^_^

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kikia Newbie Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: the planet earth Posts: 1 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 110	Diving with my thoughts Diving with my thoughts Falling from the sky we all wonder why we try not to cry but.... it's hard to watch someone die __________________ i am kikia i rule they elements i am the number 1 enemy to the state.... i do and alwise will wish i wasn't a guardienne...but to help the world and to make sure the seal is kept i will keep my posseion knowing i will never have a normal life...
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Feb 10, 2007, 11:49 AM	#2 (permalink)
Mr. K THUMBSUCKING ADDICTION Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Alaska Posts: 1,268 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 3,359	Re: Diving with my thoughts indeed true, but different when you make it out to be everyone, and not just you. Nice Poem, I wish it was a bite longer thou, seems like it ended to soon ^^ __________________ ≥°≤ [?] █▓▒░░▒▓█ [?] ≥°≤ ◕ ◡ ◕;;;;[?]
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CherryBlossom18 Heavy Metal Goddess Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: a place where the stars shine as bright as the sun Posts: 578 Thanks: 1 Thanked 16 Times in 16 Posts Credits: 2,376	Re: Diving with my thoughts Nice poem,but it could've been a little longer. Good job though. __________________ "Sunset Kisses Along The Beach" Made for me by HolderofTheDarkChalice Thanks so much I love it!
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Darkened_Star Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: Earth Posts: 334 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 4,107	Re: Diving with my thoughts Though your poem is short, it's still good. I like it. It sort of reminded me of a poem my friend wrote. She's a good writter too.^_^ Looking forward to reading more of your works! ^_^ __________________
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