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    Diving with my thoughts

    Diving with my thoughts
    Falling from the sky
    we all wonder why
    we try not to cry
    but....
    it's hard to watch someone die
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    i am the number 1 enemy to the state....
    i do and alwise will wish i wasn't a guardienne...but to help the world and to make sure the seal is kept i will keep my posseion knowing i will never have a normal life...

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    Re: Diving with my thoughts

    indeed true, but different when you make it out to be everyone, and not just you.

    Nice Poem, I wish it was a bite longer thou, seems like it ended to soon

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    Re: Diving with my thoughts

    Nice poem,but it could've been a little longer. Good job though.
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    Re: Diving with my thoughts

    Though your poem is short, it's still good. I like it. It sort of reminded me of a poem my friend wrote. She's a good writter too.^_^ Looking forward to reading more of your works! ^_^

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