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Do It For Her
Can you tell if she's smiling
By the way she's talking to you
Everyday Is so confusing
Please give her sign
Everyday she needs to hear from you
Please remind her not to cry
She needs to hear your voice
Don't let her cut herself
She knows it's not right
But she needs to find that comfort
You need to give her a call
Please give her a call
Visit her sometime
She needs a hug from you
The only one who can make it right
Only one is you
So reach out and touch her soul
Don't ignore the pain
She hides it everyday
How ashamed,
she must be
Please find a way
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Re: Do It For Her
Needs a little grammar work. The ending was quite cute. And I'm afraid, the ending is the only good thing about the poem.
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Re: Do It For Her
I have to admit, i don't like tis poem at all xD
I was bored and started typing out anything. But thank you for the comment. ^_^
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Re: Do It For Her
Very welcome. Keep writing, I'm sure something wonderful will come of it.
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Re: Do It For Her
i love it and it sad it touch my heart !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great work 
poohs my boo
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Re: Do It For Her
i dunno how to look at poems but it sounds good to me
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