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    Do It For Her

    Can you tell if she's smiling
    By the way she's talking to you
    Everyday Is so confusing
    Please give her sign
    Everyday she needs to hear from you
    Please remind her not to cry
    She needs to hear your voice
    Don't let her cut herself
    She knows it's not right
    But she needs to find that comfort
    You need to give her a call
    Please give her a call
    Visit her sometime
    She needs a hug from you
    The only one who can make it right
    Only one is you
    So reach out and touch her soul
    Don't ignore the pain
    She hides it everyday
    How ashamed,
    she must be
    Please find a way

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    Re: Do It For Her

    Needs a little grammar work. The ending was quite cute. And I'm afraid, the ending is the only good thing about the poem.
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    Re: Do It For Her

    I have to admit, i don't like tis poem at all xD
    I was bored and started typing out anything. But thank you for the comment. ^_^

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    Re: Do It For Her

    Very welcome. Keep writing, I'm sure something wonderful will come of it.
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    Re: Do It For Her

    i love it and it sad it touch my heart !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great work
    poohs my boo

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    Re: Do It For Her

    i dunno how to look at poems but it sounds good to me

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