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Reply With Quotesomething just happened like this to me last night... and you wrote this poem... thats awkward...
nice poem man ^^ keep it up
Do not be afraid,
for I am here.
I'll hold you close
and keep you near.
Don't you worry
and do not fret.
I'm here to help
you. Never forget.
Don't be scared and
please, wipe your tears.
I'll protect you from
all of the things you fear.
So do not be afraid,
for I am here.
when you're down,
I'll be around to bring you cheer.
something just happened like this to me last night... and you wrote this poem... thats awkward...
nice poem man ^^ keep it up
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so beautiful and sweet... Love is a precious thing but that can apply to friends and family.. you created a poem that can be used by anyone and is true, is sweet and simple.. I love it and cannot wait to read more. ^-^ You have great talent, keep it up ^-^
X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X
X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X
You seem to have a knack for good timing with either laura or rayme. You write relevent to both of them at various crazy times!
I really like this. Hell I really like all your work. But this one is particularly felt. And more uplifting then the normal from you.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
Originally Posted by bratling
You seem to have a knack for good timing with either laura or rayme. You write relevent to both of them at various crazy times!
I really like this. Hell I really like all your work. But this one is particularly felt. And more uplifting then the normal from you.
I actually wrote this a couple of hours after talking to Laura, LOL. So that's where the timing kicked in, but I was sitting next to you when writing it. You actually inspired this one--like many--so, thanks!
And a big giant THANK YOU to everyone else who's commented, thus far! As always, it's greatly appreciated! Special thanks to Ray for taking so much time to read my poems!
I know. I watched. I read the first few lines and left it be cause I figured you'd be posting. I liked the other ones you wrote in that notebook too. Glad to be your muse.
You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!
Glad to have you as my muse, lady! ^_^ Thanks for reading and commenting!I know. I watched. I read the first few lines and left it be cause I figured you'd be posting. I liked the other ones you wrote in that notebook too. Glad to be your muse.
lol ^^ this is totaly like what I wrote in the poem we're making together with hellknight!!!!!! ^^ That's just odd... lol ^^ and it really does sound like something Ray would say... (I think everything does anyways lately)
A nice poem, very short but very nice ^^ I enjoyed reading this and I hope to see more ^^
Last edited by Lasura; Nov 06, 2007 at 11:37 AM.
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