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    Do We Really Love?

    A new day and a new promise everything
    will be alright don't worry about how i was
    so blind to see what was in front of me,
    just know that things always will be ok.

    I hold you tightly as you cry out of
    fear of loosing me , things are always
    difficult no matter how much love is put into
    what we have , but our love is binding so
    get used to the bumpy ride since love is never
    perfect.


    I tell you i want go here or there so you can
    feel comfortable with us , i always make sure
    to tell you everything that makes you feel
    alright i know all the words ,and all the things
    to make you stay as you never think of how
    i could be doing wrong.

    As i hold you i could be thinking of someone else
    but really I'm not but i could be what makes you
    love me so after all the bull crap you have been
    through? all the tears , the pain , the confusion?

    We have cute nick names for each other we even cuddle
    at night and hold each other tight things seem so peaceful
    as nothing is said and you smile with your eyes always trusting
    love is so conforming and never limited to just one person
    or moment what makes you think there all for you?


    It sounds disheartening with how i go on like this
    but in all honesty i could never ask for anyone else
    but you , so think what you want as you go through
    life in the secure feeling of me never straying because
    your trust for me is never wavering.
    __________________________________________________ ___
    this poem is about love and it can be so strong
    or even so deceiving nothing can be seen but the s
    mile he/she gives you and the promises that you think
    they are keeping .

    Love can be so damning sometimes and it also can
    be the most amazing thing you could ever have but
    when everything is said and done its how much trust and
    dependency you have for each other that makes it last.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Do We Really Love?

    thats pretty awesome, reminds me of me and my gf. very good job

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    Re: Do We Really Love?

    this is a very good poem^^i like it very much it says alot relationships.so keep up the good work

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    Re: Do We Really Love?

    Such a sweet and truthful poem. Love is wonderful and it can sometimes be decietful,but if find the one you can trust and never see yourself living without then you have the perfect love. This poem reminds me of us. Great job.
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