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    Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    Do you know how bad you hurt us?


    Do you know how bad you hurt us?
    Maybe not on the outside
    But in the inside
    I thought we would say together forever
    But that’s not the story
    The story is that you went off with
    That woman who isn’t even your wife
    But you left us just like you left you girlfriend for me
    But I didn’t think you would to it to me
    And to your three children how keep asking
    Wares daddy, I want him here, I miss him
    But all I have to say is sorry kid’s daddy’s away
    But he might be home soon
    Could you please tell us when you will come back to us
    Because we all miss you
    But I mightn’t feel the same way but we do all still miss you
    Will you come back to us?

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    kinda confusing at first coz it's about a break up and then it's about the father. but i think i get it now. it's all right just a few spelling errors here n there and tht's abt it.

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    I get it now. Your dad left your mom? That's really sad..Loved it though.

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    no thats not what happend TT__TT
    its about someone i really look up to
    but thanks for the comments

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    hehehe nice one. It was kinda confusing, but i get the message.

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    cool im happy some of you did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

    y do u have to type longer now !!!!!!!!!!!!( i hate it)

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    Other than a couple of spelling errors the poem was great! I love your poems because they have a much deeper meaning beneath the surface! Once again great job!

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    Re: Do you know how bad you hurt us?

    That was a good poem. The same thing happened to me 9 years ago. The only thing different is I don't have any kids. It was like you read my mind and wrote about it. Keep up the good work.

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