Do you know me?

Can one ever wish?
Ever let go?
Do you wonder
What the afterlife maybe?
Do you believe
One can never dream?
Pray among the bright moonlight?
Care no more of this place
Standing in the waters
Watching from a far
I turn away in a fade
I cry no more
I worry no longer
My fears have reached
My heart burns of sadness
Happiness I run to
My mind races
Breathe again
Let my soul come clean
My tainted body
I wash away in the
Waters of purity
No more hiding
Everything around
Become bright by the light
Darkness no longer here
I close my eyes and smile
My head high up
My arms wide opened
I let myself fly
My wings here
My soul is blessed
Do you know me now?

Wow that was awesome so pure so heartfelt, i love ur poems. Do good everyday, love ur work keep it up:)

Thanks Rowena-chan. I guess my work is that good. I may post another post soon.

Punctuation would have created a smooth flow, in my opinion.

Umm ok I guess. But you liked it didn't you Kasai-san?

nice work :) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but may me a liittle depressed and wonder a little more about life.

yea i agree with akilla-san it made me think but over all a great poem as usual

great poem, wish they had rating's on this so i can give a 10 keep it up