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    Do you know me?

    Can one ever wish?
    Ever let go?
    Do you wonder
    What the afterlife maybe?
    Do you believe
    One can never dream?
    Pray among the bright moonlight?
    Care no more of this place
    Standing in the waters
    Watching from a far
    I turn away in a fade
    I cry no more
    I worry no longer
    My fears have reached
    My heart burns of sadness
    Happiness I run to
    My mind races
    Breathe again
    Let my soul come clean
    My tainted body
    I wash away in the
    Waters of purity
    No more hiding
    Everything around
    Become bright by the light
    Darkness no longer here
    I close my eyes and smile
    My head high up
    My arms wide opened
    I let myself fly
    My wings here
    My soul is blessed
    Do you know me now?
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    Re: Do you know me?

    Wow that was awesome so pure so heartfelt, i love ur poems. Do good everyday, love ur work keep it up
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    Thanks Rowena-chan. I guess my work is that good. I may post another post soon.
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    Re: Do you know me?

    Punctuation would have created a smooth flow, in my opinion.
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    Umm ok I guess. But you liked it didn't you Kasai-san?
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    Re: Do you know me?

    nice work !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! but may me a liittle depressed and wonder a little more about life.
    poohs my boo

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    yea i agree with akilla-san it made me think but over all a great poem as usual
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    great poem, wish they had rating's on this so i can give a 10 keep it up

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