Wow, while reading this, I noticed that your writing in this poem is kinda similar to bratilng's works (well, a few). For example:
I was intrigued by this poem. This is very interesting. I like this one. Good job and kudos!When one sees me, they see sweet sugar drizzled with the essence of innocence.
They would never suspect that underneath the sugary coating lies a demon
A demon that is fatal to anyone that crosses its path.