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    do you rember?

    do you rember me
    do you rember us
    do you rember my touch, my kisses...
    do you miss me
    or even think of me,
    do you want me,
    or even love me,
    have i been replaced,
    or am i still in your heart,
    what do i need to do,
    to win you back,
    i can't go on,
    if you dont rember me!



    it's not the best but i just broke up with my bf when i wrote it!

    IN THE END IT DOSENT EVEN MATTER

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    Re: do you rember?

    I have felt like this when I broke up with my last boyfriend. I was so sad and lonely for a long time. I am now back together with him and I feel so fortunate to have be so lucky. I'm sorry to hear you and you boyfriend breaking up. I hope you get back together cause it sounds like you really love him.
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    ya i do! but he lives over a 1000 miles away! the reason we broke up is because i moved! but i still love him and i really miss him!

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    Re: do you rember?

    oooooh that so sad angel!
    I've felt like that before too
    I hate it
    but the poem is good
    the repitition really makes it stick

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    Re: do you rember?

    Another heart broken poem... silly reason though, no offence. I like it, short but you made your point

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    Re: do you rember?

    lol thanks! i never really write poems! so ya! but i dont think that it was a silly reason! normally whn u are dad you can write ur best! at least thats how i am!

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    Re: do you rember?

    You could at least make an effort to capitalize the needed words. It would make the poem much easier to read for those who care to see correct grammar and such.
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    Re: do you rember?

    hmm a nice poem ^^ but like kasai said.. hehe spellings and grammar

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