Re: Do you remember me now?
Hmmm... it was nice... quite different from others, it has its own style therefore it's hard to say: "you did wrong there and there and there!" :D: the flow seemed nice... and it's simple and short and interesting to read. And has this odd emotion in it, brought me back to my childhood... *sighs, daydreams* yea.... :D:
The only part I didn't think was that nice was this:
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You are nice, cute, smart, athletic, and everything else.
lol ^^ it's all ok 'till "and everything else"... that is just so odd... :D: and "but dude" is also something that just didn't seem to fit in this poem. I know only one person who could put such words in a serious poem and still make it look good (that's sprout :D:) and it asks a lot of talent or a lot of "ease" to your life..
But I will be looking forward for more ^^ cheers! :D: