Thread: do you still love me?

I think its pretty good,but maybe you should try to make it a little longer and play with the words a bit? ^^ but i like it good job!

Great job on it,See you made some of the changes i said you should have done..But as was said maybe a little logger next time ? don't get me wrong i still like,Hope to see more soon.

hmmm it was alright i think you need to use more descriptive words. when writting try having the reader painta picture in their mind of what your talking about. but in all it was a good poem. good job ^^

I gotta agree with shadow and black rose.. ^^ descriptions are needed...

Too many questions and no answers.. :/ but still its a nice poem ^^

The poem was quite heart touching to me sis, Though it was short but yet it was really sweet

love ta hear more



-Zainab

Lately I feel like I can somewhat relate to this, but the only difference is that I know My lover loves me. Its just hard sometimes but things get better.. I would have to say keep writing your feels and they will matter! They really do!