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    does it hurt...............

    does it hurt to see me so happy?....
    does it hurt to not see me gray?......
    can u tell me please the truth.......
    we can get over this today.......
    Yeah, Bye.

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    Re: does it hurt...............

    Short and sweet very well done but if your going to mkae another try and make it a little longer but as i said that was short and sweet

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    Re: does it hurt...............

    Ahhh... just what I feel and want to ask... A nice one, it has a very deep thought in it and many feelings even though it's so short...

    A great work I think, enjoyed reading it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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