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    Does this make me weak?

    One tear hits the ground,
    Silently without a sound,
    Another falls from my cheek,
    Does this make me weak?

    All day I fight back tears,
    All the lies All the sneers,
    The more tears I try to hide,
    The more that I die inside.

    They say that I cannot feel,
    But thats what I do as I kneel,
    On this cold hard ground,
    tears and blood all around.

    I try to make it through this life,
    Never giving up the fight,
    It is happiness that I seek,
    Does that make me weak?
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    Re: Does this make me weak?

    Snear = Sneer

    Good job, i love the completeness of the ending. This is actually a fairly good poem, the thought is expressed throughout the piece.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    Re: Does this make me weak?

    Wow, beautiful. I think alot of people mistake this kind of pain, this kind of soul searching for weakness. It takes a certain level of sensitivity to look this far within ones self. But that is NOT weakness, on the contrary, it is STRENGTH...
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