A Doll's Confession

Awesome poem raja I have to agree with HolderofTheDarkChalice this poem really says it all! Excellent job buddy! :thumb:

Thanks for your wonderful comment Blue_Fox! i do appreciate it. ^^

It really tugs at my heart. It conveys the feeling of helplessness of someone who can’t do anything for a secretly loved one, something that I can understand. How often one stands at a corner and silently watched their special loved one struggling through their difficulties and yet cannot be of any help or comfort. Good one! Hope you can come up with more of equal standard.

Thank you, LouisaDeztini for your comment ^^ i apreciate it

Great poem showing a doll's hopeless love for her creator. It also shows that even dolls can love. Is the doll somewhat related to you? I mean, does it represent your feelings somehow?

wow i really really liked it, and dolls can love too.

@Twisted fate: Thanks for your comment, i do appreciate. yes this poem, is related to my feelings. Poems are my outlet of emotions.

@ Shippo101 I am happy that you liked it. Yes dolls love too ^^;

Doll, I might have helped you feel like a doll a long time ago when we first met. I wonder if I inspired you so long after that first meeting ;)

I found it similar, yet original the way you placed your words and seems like a response to what I had written.... :)

I just hope you don't simply stay immobile in face of your feelings as it's at those times that you might miss out on moments in life that you may never forget.

I'm sooo sleepy, but gotta go to school now!!!!