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    A Doll's Confession




    A Doll’s Confession

    Sitting in an old wooden chair,
    My violet eyes are at constant stare
    In the direction of my doll maker,
    The doll maker, who is my creator.

    His words are like harmony in my heart,
    His every single deed brings joy.
    The way he looks makes my heart feel
    Emotions I never knew would be real.

    I feel so worthless and weak,
    In the times I do see him cry
    Knowing that I can’t wipe his tears
    And to calm his innermost fears.

    The thing that they call life,
    Is what I will forever long for,
    To make it possible for me to confess
    My love and adoration to my dearest!

    Is it a sin for a doll like me,
    To love the being who created me?
    Is it wrong for me to feel,
    The passion destined for human beings?


    thanks for reading, you may post critiques and comments. i feel like a doll this past few days, j/k^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Re: A Doll's Confession

    i love the distance in this poem ,how love can never be just like in real
    life when to people never meet becuase one never tell's the other they
    love them ,it sound tragic but life wouldn't be the same if life was always happy. thats what i got from this very awesome poem raja glad to see you posting again
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    ^^ Thank you Chris for heart-touching comment. ^^ Life can be sometimes so unfair for those who love and etc. Lucky are those who can express their love to their dearest. ^^

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    Talk about hiting me with a hammer that was some amazing words I think even my avatars jaw droped! I really love the way you put it together I give a 50/10!!! I hope to read more!
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    that was just amazing... ^^ sometimes, I do feel like a doll, with people treating me as if i had no emotions or stuff... (sniff, sniff) well, I do look forward to reading more of your work, too... keep up the great job!

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    @Nightboyz: Thanks for making your comment on this poen of mine. ^^ it is really appreciated

    @Sachiko ueto: Thank you for posting your comment here. there are time when life/ people are treating us unfairly... but that's the way life goes.
    Last edited by raja_psyche; Nov 03, 2006 at 07:07 AM.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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    It engages the reader if they knew the meaning of each line.reading it,i found dat as it was the doll speaking 2 me instead of u writing it.it felt so soft,a deep feeling of sadness n it was as though dat the doll yearns for freedom

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    ^^ thanks for your comment JefferyXie, it is highly appreciated.

    Thank you very much,Reese for this wonderful signature ^_^

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