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Old Jul 06, 2006, 07:13 AM   #1 (permalink)
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don't close your heart

when i saw you for the first time

i saw a lonely person
i saw a person with no friends

i came to you
falling for you
with each step that hits the ground

i came to you
with open arms

i saw your tears of joy
for finding a friend

when we first met
i remember how you let go
each time you felt down for something you had to do

each time i see you in pain
i feel pain
each time i see you sad
i feel sad

i still wonder why don't you let me in
inside your world
inside your feelings

are you worried of me caring for you ?
of me getting worried?
or me getting angry?

i can't do anything if you keep me out
i love you
i swear i do

but why don't you
just open your heart
why don't you let me in your sorrows , pain and life

how could you say
that you feel happy like this

i can see you suffering
behind my back

which makes me suffer more than you

i wish to help you
i wish to be there for you

as you are here for me

my heart can't see tears of suffering

those tears from your eyes are too valuable to be shed
i don't want to let anything make you cry
beacause it hurts me more and makes me cry more
to see you like that

i remember seeing you happy for the first time in your life
when we met

i wish to always see you like that
so
please, my love
please, my angel
please, my princess

don't close your heart and leave me alone outside
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Old Jul 06, 2006, 07:16 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: don't close your heart

Hmmmm.............I thought It was alright, but I think you should work on it a little Bit, but I'am just saying nothin more.
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Old Jul 06, 2006, 07:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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... nice (='.'=) and beautiful...sounds like pleads to me ^_^
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