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    Done by dawn.

    When the clock strikes damn
    our love will be done.
    So will your lies,
    and my head numbing replies.

    No! I dont want to know were you've been
    or why you persist
    To give me a kiss
    in a situation like this.

    I'm a woman with a heart
    in my chest, and a brain in my head.
    While your a man with brain
    in your baggy Lee Jeans.

    Leave me alone please and let me
    reasset why i put up with you
    Because I know you cant do the things you use to.
    And love dont live in this house.

    Love dont live here because she brakes things,
    Like my heart, and your devotion.
    She steals too. Like your sense.
    But she's nice enough at night to hand you the lotion.

    I'm done by dawn with this love.
    Take the one who is better then me and
    care for her. Because maybe she
    Is isnt a woman like me.





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    Re: Done by dawn.

    This is so much more structured and powerful than the other stuff I have seen. You know this evokes such a vivid image, which is that of a woman pushing a guy away who is trying to kiss her, which I have seen a few times. The fifth stanza were you contrast love with sex is amazing. The second in last stanzas where the man is blown off is great.

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