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    don't close your heart

    when i saw you for the first time

    i saw a lonely person
    i saw a person with no friends

    i came to you
    falling for you
    with each step that hits the ground

    i came to you
    with open arms

    i saw your tears of joy
    for finding a friend

    when we first met
    i remember how you let go
    each time you felt down for something you had to do

    each time i see you in pain
    i feel pain
    each time i see you sad
    i feel sad

    i still wonder why don't you let me in
    inside your world
    inside your feelings

    are you worried of me caring for you ?
    of me getting worried?
    or me getting angry?

    i can't do anything if you keep me out
    i love you
    i swear i do

    but why don't you
    just open your heart
    why don't you let me in your sorrows , pain and life

    how could you say
    that you feel happy like this

    i can see you suffering
    behind my back

    which makes me suffer more than you

    i wish to help you
    i wish to be there for you

    as you are here for me

    my heart can't see tears of suffering

    those tears from your eyes are too valuable to be shed
    i don't want to let anything make you cry
    beacause it hurts me more and makes me cry more
    to see you like that

    i remember seeing you happy for the first time in your life
    when we met

    i wish to always see you like that
    so
    please, my love
    please, my angel
    please, my princess

    don't close your heart and leave me alone outside
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    Re: don't close your heart

    Hmmmm.............I thought It was alright, but I think you should work on it a little Bit, but I'am just saying nothin more.

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    Re: don't close your heart

    ... nice (='.'=) and beautiful...sounds like pleads to me ^_^
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